kokokokokokoko.. mana sih kok gada yg ke DA lg temen2nya? hehe..
esther doang nih. hihihi

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Wow. That's a lot of poetry. With all of your skill for crafting words and phrases and evoking emotion, you should try more structured forms of poetry. You might like them. I personally like villanelles. To learn how to make one (they're not hard), just google it, read mine ("Flow" and "Will"), or ask someone (like me, haha, or someone else, too).

On the other hand, though you write in an open style, you do keep a structure; it's not just random sentences. There isn't a ton of rhythm, though, but that is a hard thing to craft and sometimes a hard thing for someone else to pick up on if they're just reading it and not hearing it read aloud.

Overall, I like your stuff. And that's saying a lot, because I don't like poetry. Keep up the good work.

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thank you for the

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thanx for the favorite! :-D

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Thanks for the favourite

Thank you for the favorite

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